Heather’s Reviews > Lakota Winds > Status Update
Heather
is finished
I'm so glad to finally be done! There was no rising action, no climax, & no conflict between the hero & heroine where they're separated & reunited that I look forward to. It feels like I've been in a marathon, & I'm so happy to be away from that writing. The heroine changed drastically from the first scene & love happened too soon. I didn't like the ending, where you'd have to read the next book for it to make sense.
— Nov 24, 2019 05:15PM
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Heather
is on page 209 of 312
11-23. Pg209. This book is so annoying. I don't even wanna read it anymore, I just wanna be done. It's one big love fest, everyone complimenting, praising and declaring love for everyone else. I just can't. It's so dramatic and awful to read. Everything is so perfect idk where the conflict is gonna come in at or what it'll be. Everything is even worse because it's taking me so long to read. Ughhh!
— Nov 23, 2019 08:57PM
Heather
is on page 196 of 312
11-22. Pg196. The dialogue is still highly annoying and is ruining the book. The writing isn't good, it's flowery, and dramatic. The plot is slow-moving. I just wanna be done with this and the terrible dialogue. I do still like learning of their customs, though. This book is kicking my butt; it's taking me forever to finish!
— Nov 22, 2019 08:28PM
Heather
is on page 149 of 312
11-21. Pg149. The dialogue is maddening to read; it's mostly made up of characters thanking and complimenting each other. It sounds robotic and unnatural. The repetition of words and phrases are really annoying. As was the jealous side character & the ploys there. The heroine changed drastically, completely different from how she first appeared. I hope the plot picks up. I haven't made the progress I want to.
— Nov 21, 2019 09:05PM
Heather
is on page 80 of 312
11-20. Pg80. The hero and heroine's stories are way too similar. This is also similar to Comanche Moon, and I hope it doesn't stay that way. I wanna see some differences or I already know how this will go. The plot is kinda absurd with the destiny thing, but I've been interested in reading this & I love learning the cool and interesting customs they have.
— Nov 20, 2019 08:25PM
