Jilrene’s Reviews > The Body Reader > Status Update

This feels dystopian. It was going ok, a bit different since both main characters are broken and distant. It makes me feel removed from the action. Most likely a deliberate choice by the author. I don't hate it. Just not my favorite technique.

I've reached a spot in the story that isn't working for me. I'm going to finish (probably) because I want to know if I've guessed the killer.