Toofan’s Reviews > Copping A Lot Of Sin > Status Update
Toofan
is 24% done
It started OK, but than all of the sudden the writing changed to condense boring info dump, a lot of telling and absolutely no showing.
— Dec 01, 2019 11:48AM
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Toofan
is 35% done
The writing is really immature. It is annoying. but the story is somewhat entertaining.
— Dec 01, 2019 12:11PM
