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Mark
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The story has a good set up so far. The downside is that there is a lot of jumping back and forth along the story's timeline making it hard to keep track of the overall story order. Each chapter seems to take place 4 months later than the previous one while the next one takes place two weeks before this one and the one after that takes place a month after the one before this one. Still digging it.
— Mar 23, 2013 08:14AM
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Mark
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some of the subject matter here is really hard to read, not badly written, just feely emotional and the lurking evil in the human ID and the power of stupid people acting in large groups.
— Apr 02, 2013 01:13PM
Mark
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Reading this one online and still haven't gotten to dig in deep yet. Great set up so far.
— Mar 19, 2013 03:29PM
