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Okay, I have a list twice as long as my arm of good books I could be spending my time on right now. I think I might have to give it up.
I am officially sick of reading the words: 'Obviously', 'Clearly' and 'Therefore'. Attempt at foreshadowing and romance is stodgy. I can't determine one character from the other, they're all so textbook. It's like the bastard daughter of a bastard son of a cousin of Game Of Thrones.
— Dec 06, 2019 02:57PM
I am officially sick of reading the words: 'Obviously', 'Clearly' and 'Therefore'. Attempt at foreshadowing and romance is stodgy. I can't determine one character from the other, they're all so textbook. It's like the bastard daughter of a bastard son of a cousin of Game Of Thrones.
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It is a very difficult thing for me to willingly not complete a book I have started. However, I am only on the second chapter and I'm already feeling I don't want to invest much more of my time on this.
The problem isn't the plot line or the lack of (in this case over-abundance) of world building. The problem I have with this is the heavy-handed, over explained, and completely stocky writing style/dare I say, script.
— Nov 22, 2019 07:12PM
The problem isn't the plot line or the lack of (in this case over-abundance) of world building. The problem I have with this is the heavy-handed, over explained, and completely stocky writing style/dare I say, script.
