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''Asshole,” Ronan said.
Adam smiled cheerily. Ronan would start wars and burn cities for that true smile, elastic and amiable.
The problem with this is that 20 pages ago, none of that attraction and desire was even hinted upon. And we've been in Ronan's mind for a while now. I wish I got to fall in love with Adam alongside Ronan, as Adam isn't a really sympathetic character. I wish this was not so rushed.
— Dec 17, 2019 12:58AM
Adam smiled cheerily. Ronan would start wars and burn cities for that true smile, elastic and amiable.
The problem with this is that 20 pages ago, none of that attraction and desire was even hinted upon. And we've been in Ronan's mind for a while now. I wish I got to fall in love with Adam alongside Ronan, as Adam isn't a really sympathetic character. I wish this was not so rushed.
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Because I didn't read any reviews, I was pretty much slapped in the face qith Adam being Ronan's love interest. The problem with that is... exactly that. Zero build up, and suddenly in two pages Ronan is daydreaming about licking fingers and Adam just being there all aware. It was disappointing. I feel like these characters assuredly deserved better.
— Dec 16, 2019 07:22PM