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I'm about 15% (2.30 hours or 17.15 hours) its been a bit tedious to be kind. I'm not sure if the problem is the narrator or the actual writing or both. This story has a great concept but the execution is less than I had expected, the story is very predictable and the dialog needs a lot of work. Maybe I'll come back to it.
I've decided that I'm going to put this one back on the stack, give it another chance later.
— Dec 30, 2019 08:39PM
I've decided that I'm going to put this one back on the stack, give it another chance later.
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Al Brown
is on page 70 of 446
I'm about 15% (2.30 hours or 17.15 hours) its been a bit tedious to be kind. I'm not sure if the problem is the narrator or the actual writing or both. This story has a great concept but the execution is less than I had expected, the story is very predictable and the dialog needs a lot of work. Maybe I'll come back to it.
— Dec 11, 2018 09:20AM

