Dawn’s Reviews > Groupie Chronicles 1 > Status Update
Dawn
is 24% done
Maybe it's just me but too much sex in a non erotic book is boring and pointless. Where is the storyline??? 24% done and 23% of it has been sex. What is my reason for liking the main character? What is my reason for liking any of the characters? I can't relate to this and I don't even want too. *yawn* Moving on to the next book, hopefully one with a plot.
— Apr 03, 2013 06:10AM
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Dawn
is 45% done
I love a good erotic novel, I do not however enjoy a regular fiction novel with sex on damn near every page! Where the storyline? Wait it must be buried deep between her legs because that's where we seem to end up every other page. I was hoping something was going to change and that's why I came back to this book. I hate leaving a book unfinished but this is insane!
— Apr 09, 2013 05:26AM
Dawn
is 11% done
Do ball players shop at Jared's??? I thought just regular folks did that...
— Apr 03, 2013 05:35AM
Dawn
is 9% done
Overuse of exclamation points is annoying as hell. I wonder if I'm going to be able to finish this book? I'm glad it was free or I'd be pissed from the bad formatting alone...
— Apr 03, 2013 05:31AM
