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Shane
is 75% done
So disappointing! I am really irritated at the narrator/first person/third person point-of-views that keep switching - even occurring in the same paragraph! I just got an email from Amazon saying an update was available with "significant editorial changes" and typo corrections. I've already read 75%, ugh.
— Apr 03, 2013 09:57AM
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Shane
is 75% done
So disappointing! I am really irritated at the narrator/first person/third person point-of-views that keep switching - even in the same paragraph!
— Apr 03, 2013 10:04AM

