Elizabeth’s Reviews > Enslaved by the Desert Trader > Status Update

Story has picked up again. Should have had more on the hero's captivity and torture and less on the love of all humanity, and all men/women are born equal, which would be a thought totally absent from that world. Despite the total submission of the male character before the glory of the female one, and her finally rewarding him with sex for the trouble, this couple is fetching. Good writing saves the day, I suppose.

Story getting off its rocker now, managing to be both crazy and boring. As if having the hero's very contemporary worship and appreciation of the heroine was not enough to put you off, now the Pharaoh wants to marry her. The latter and the heroine are touring the kingdom on the way to their nuptials in Memphis (Ancient Egypt -Kemet) and she has turned into a Diana Spencer. No sign of the hero for some chapters now.