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Jan 08, 2020 10:29AM
Eden's Fall: Sparrowood Academy (Sparrowood Academy, #1-3)

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Soo summary of part 1 is a little chaotic. I feel the storyline is decent and it’s definitely intriguing but there are a lot of details missed and grammar errors. The book constantly refers to “4” guys when there is clearly only 3 in a situation...one character is referred to as Camille the entire time and then randomly Callie? I’m going to continue to part 2 and hope it gets better.
Jan 08, 2020 10:31AM
Eden's Fall: Sparrowood Academy (Sparrowood Academy, #1-3)


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