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Claire B **paused for now**
is 99% done
Bland and unexciting. Odd narrative choice didn’t help. Nor did overuse of the vernacular “anyways”. Not for me.
*2.5 Stars* rounded down
— Jan 13, 2020 04:02PM
*2.5 Stars* rounded down
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Claire B **paused for now**
is 48% done
In my opinion third person present tense as a narrative style should be banned. I find it awkward and stilted at best. Unfortunately, it’s spoiling this book of me.
— Jan 13, 2020 08:34AM
