Clara Bell’s Reviews > Sundial > Status Update

Tries a little too hard, and doesn't seem to know what kind of book it wants to be. Teen drama? Paranormal romance? Spy thriller? Dialogue was stilted at times, and character skills and thought patterns weren't realistically explained (not talking about the psychic abilities here). Interesting idea, undeveloped execution. And geez, do I hate cliffhanger endings in novels. Write a discrete story, please!