Alina’s Reviews > Extracted > Status Update

Oh god. It is bad. Worse than I expected. "A sports bra keeps her chest as flat as possible, the cost of the discomfort weighing off against the reduction in attention." Yikes. "The trousers are good, they hide the shape of her curves..." No. "Shaped and hued like an Egyptian goddess." STOP. "Dusky skin tone." How about no?

The author is a) very ignorant b) unaware of how women work c) sexist & racist.

So far I'm unsure about this. Don't think I like Ben Ryder too much, and the author's descriptions of women are not great. I chose this for the premise which sounds amazing but I'll have to see if it can save the story.