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Daniel is 24% done
So far I'm not a fan. LotR ripoff aside, the writing is terrible. Sometimes the words coming out of a character's mouth (which is rare enough given that the book is almost entirely narration) make no sense. Freed tries to use Old English but the sentences are nonsensical. The random bios of characters and even fleeting thoughts of non-characters serve to pad out a bad story. It will be work to finish this book.
Feb 05, 2020 06:34AM
Armies of the Silver Mage (History of Malweir, #1)

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