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Joan
is 75% done
Sigh. The evil ex has hardly appeared. The two protagonists are having sex ( and about time after pages and pages of navel-gazing and UST and I am bored. I wanted something to keep me reading, and there isnt anything.
— Feb 14, 2020 05:17AM
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Joan
is 31% done
Come on -- a week before the wedding and the bridesmaid and best man are sorting out the flowers and trying to decide what colour flowers for the mother of the groom? And do the mothers actually carry 'nosegays' at a wedding?? I certainly didnt! Corsage, yes, but not carrying a bunch of flowers!!
this part had a weird feeling to it. :(
— Feb 14, 2020 04:12AM
this part had a weird feeling to it. :(
Joan
is 30% done
The writing is clunky in places and there are some peculiar moments, but the premise is good and the two main characters interesting.
— Feb 14, 2020 12:31AM
