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There's an interesting story her, but the lack of editing is killing me.
— May 01, 2013 08:06AM
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Mele
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I'm definitely interested in the story and curious enough to continue, but I'm having a hard time with the writing style. Hopefully that melts away as I go forward. The jumping from past tense to present tense, and the dropping of prepositions makes it slightly difficult to get lost in the story.
— Apr 30, 2013 08:10AM
