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I'm really struggling with this one. I can't seem to engage with the writing, because it's so simplistic. Every single sentence is forced and awkward. It's not adding atmosphere. It's boring me.

As well, Sadie is a highly annoying character. Her naive hysteria and judgmental attitude are confusing. I don't even care if there are any big twists coming at this point.
Mar 10, 2020 07:20AM
The Other Mrs.

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LordTBR Felt the same way. And those mouse chapters...


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