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Emily W
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I cannot stand the head jumping. If that’s what you have to resort to to confuse your audience, maybe you’re in the wrong genre. Head swapping should preferably only happen at chapter changes, but at the very least there should be a clear scene change. Her spacing between scenes is not clear enough.
— Mar 10, 2020 10:30PM
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Emily W
is 20% done
If a book is set in America, American English spellings should be used, which means defense not defence.
— Mar 10, 2020 10:54PM
