Elithanathile’s Reviews > Timing > Status Update

// I can’t anymore!!

// So with all the schmoozing and talking to one another, how is it that neither one of them is rushing to call their boss or their new potential employer?!? One MC is a no-show at work and the other is a no-show at his new job - at training - so how is it that neither one of them is calling their boss; that would be the first thing that I would’ve done!!

// “He waved his apology to the driver, but he didn’t stick around to check out the angry expression on his face.”

~ If he didn’t stick around to check out the bus driver’s expression, then how did you know that the expression was angry?!? This is where the “omnipotent” presence of an author comes into play, and this author needs to but the fuck out of it! He does this a lot and it’s obnoxious!

// Huh, we’re not off to a bad start ... 😏!!

// This seems to be one of those other authors that I will absolutely stay away from in the future! I own one more book and when I’m done with that one, after this one, I am blacklisting this author too! You can just tell when an author doesn’t write well! On that note what the fuck is up with swallowing pills dry? You think you sound cool, but you sound like an idiot! And pills DO NOT dissolve in an instant!!!!