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Kayla
is on page 72 of 302
Cole’s inner monologues take up most of the chapters than the actual action or dialogue. Plus I already can tell that Nicky isn’t going to be very good for Cole. Also, for being a self proclaimed bookworm Cole doesn’t think that there are actually good ya and teen books out there featuring m/m love. That idea that they just don’t exist comes across as a bit ignorant. But I’m going to try and continue this
— Apr 03, 2020 11:56PM
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Kayla
is on page 100 of 302
Dnf @ 100 pages. I’m sorry I wanted to like this and I understand how important a story like this is but the inner monologues just took too much away from the meaning.
— Apr 08, 2020 03:47PM
Kayla
is on page 73 of 302
Also there seems a possibility in a potential discussion about women writing m/m books and the good and bad from that and I just want to say that I know of some who started off writing m/m romance but ended up learning they are queer themselves so there’s that too and Cole is coming across as if lesbians and queer women don’t exist but I am early in the story so we’ll see if he’ll grow in any way
— Apr 04, 2020 12:00AM
Kayla
is on page 40 of 302
Didn’t care for the blatant sexism from the main character Cole but I’m hoping that doesn’t happen again
— Mar 30, 2020 12:48AM
