Cassandra Giovanni’s Reviews > Love Exactly > Status Update

It's now in the editors hands!

Love it when someone gets slapped! Go Emma! (Hey, I couldn't kill anyone off...so someone had to get their butt handed to them, right? ;)

Ha...some typos are just funny: "I don't want the band to bounce on you just yet..." *giggles to self* boy, am I glad I found that one...

Now I need to upload the changes to word...my list favorite part !!!

I've decided on three additional chapters thus far that need to be added. I think this will help with the flow in the beginning of the book and give a little more background about the MC and her life/relationships outside of Evan. I'm still hoping to be done and able to get this to my editor by Sunday night, though. Hopefully, we can work together to get this done before my financial accounting class starts...;)

Just merged two chapters (which ones...not sure seeing the chapter headings aren't correct right now)...There was no transition and it moved better as one whole chapter.

For a 50K book this is a quick read. I wonder if it's a bad thing...some of my other novels people have commented the same--saying they are novellas, when in fact they are well over the 40K max of a novella. It's not that they don't have depth--they do. You just get swept away in the story line...if I do say so myself...

I have to chuckle at myself: The only issue was the fact that I was thinking about smothering him in the hot chocolate syrup. I gave him a weak smile and closed my eyes as I tried to wash the image away. Now I was the one who needed a cold shower.

The flows feeling better, but I think I need to slow down the first few chapters...add in some more about her at work or something boring...too much excitement all at once. What do you like--jumping right in or a little background and bore??