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Kara Laufeyson
Kara Laufeyson is 10% done
I’m enjoying the story, and I’m enjoying the bantering between Parris and Thomas. The book has several typos, missing quotation marks (making things confusing), and there’s a missing word in the second chapter. When the third chapter ends and the fourth begins, there’s no “chapter four” above the new chapter. I want to see where it goes, but the author needs to edit her work.
Apr 16, 2020 08:03PM
Interlude in Time (Love Spell)

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Kara Laufeyson
Kara Laufeyson is 31% done
Misplaced quotation marks abound, 2 missing words, typos, but still a good story taking shape.
Apr 19, 2020 07:47PM
Interlude in Time (Love Spell)


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