Lauren’s Reviews > Our Tragic Universe > Status Update

I’m not giving up on this yet but wanted to note how terrible the ...construction? Layout? Breakdown? is. There are almost no paragraph breaks; most pages read as one lonnnnng passage and are easy to get lost in. There are no chapters. Just part 1 and then halfway through, part 2. Who allowed this! Very hard on the reader, esp when plot is not enthralling yet. Narrator is not interesting enough for me to ramble.