David’s Reviews > The Raie'Chaelia > Status Update
David
is 15% done
I tried to keep reading this book, but it became too painful. A slow start to a story is one thing and understandable when part of a series. However, basically nothing going on at all within this point I'm not hooked. This book and the rest of the series are trash fantasy.
— May 27, 2013 03:06PM
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David
is 10% done
At this point in any book a reader should start to feel for the characters or begin to revile them. To be honest right now I feel nothing for them. Why? Nothing really has happened worth mentioning. For any fantasy title that spells sudden death of reader investment in the story or characters.
— May 22, 2013 02:06PM