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I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention by not reading the signs. For example it says, "My brother falls back to the ground. The bird tweets at him angrily. "It doesn't seem to want you back in there," I say. That's when I notice a sign above the field's fence. In all capital letters it says: VEGETOPIA RESIDENTS: KEEP OUT OR ELSE!" This is why I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention.
— May 15, 2020 08:09PM
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Settings Characters
Original: Smithville Abby, Jonah, Prince, Hansel
Over all: In the story Hansel and Gretel. Gretel, and Patty,
The candy house. Cauliflower [the bird] etc. The forest.
The garden.
The pond.
— May 19, 2020 10:00AM
Original: Smithville Abby, Jonah, Prince, Hansel
Over all: In the story Hansel and Gretel. Gretel, and Patty,
The candy house. Cauliflower [the bird] etc. The forest.
The garden.
The pond.
Mingmei
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Cause: Hansel, and Gretel went into Abby, and Jonah's portal, and now the portal is gone.
Effect: The witch is going to cook Abby, Jonah, and Prince. And they are stuck in a cage helplessly.
— May 18, 2020 11:52AM
Effect: The witch is going to cook Abby, Jonah, and Prince. And they are stuck in a cage helplessly.
Mingmei
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I think Hansel is acting very mean. For example it says, "He picks up a rock and tosses it at Prince, just missing. "Hey!" I shout. "So?" Hansel says. "It's just a dog." "Just a dog?" I say. "What is wrong with you? And he's not dumb. Be nice to him!" This is why I think Hansel is acting very mean.
— May 17, 2020 07:26PM
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Problems
Time is moving faster in Smithville.
Abby and Jonah are getting into trouble a lot today.
Abby, Jonah, Gretel, and Hansel are having trouble finding the white bird that's suppose to lead the m to the candy house.
Abby, and Jonah are acting a little bit spoiled, and bratty.
— May 16, 2020 07:57PM
Time is moving faster in Smithville.
Abby and Jonah are getting into trouble a lot today.
Abby, Jonah, Gretel, and Hansel are having trouble finding the white bird that's suppose to lead the m to the candy house.
Abby, and Jonah are acting a little bit spoiled, and bratty.
Mingmei
is on page 31
I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention by not reading the signs. For example it says, "My brother falls back to the ground. The bird tweets at him angrily. "It doesn't seem to want you back in there," I say. That's when I notice a sign above the field's fence. In all capital letters it says: VEGETOPIA RESIDENTS: KEEP OUT OR ELSE!" This is why I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention.
— May 15, 2020 08:12PM
Mingmei
is on page 31
I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention by not reading the signs. For example it says, "My brother falls back to the ground. The bird tweets at him angrily. "It doesn't seem to want you back in there," I say. That's when I notice a sign above the field's fence. In all capital letters it says: VEGETOPIA RESIDENTS: KEEP OUT OR ELSE!" This is why I think Abby, and Jonah aren't paying attention.
— May 15, 2020 08:11PM
