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Louise
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The New Guy in Town: I'm guessing the main focus of this short story is the sex right because I felt the dialogue to be a little forced and i wasn't particularly warmed to any of the characters as such. As for the sex it was hot and I guess I did enjoy this story so I'm giving it 3 stars.
— Jun 09, 2013 02:39AM
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Louise
is 25% done
Lunch Hour Lounge - My main concern so far is it would be much easier to read if apostrophes were used more frequently! People generally do not say 'could not' 'would not' etc I find it much more realistic when an author uses language in a way we would speak it and not so formal. As for this story, I did find it completely far fetched! Anyway I'm afraid this story was only given 2 stars.
— Jun 10, 2013 01:27PM
