Sarah Mac’s Reviews > Gallant Officer, Forbidden Lady > Status Update
Sarah Mac
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It's not bad, but needs more action. :/ And I don't understand why Jack -- a decorated military vet, albeit untitled -- doesn't call Tranville out for such manipulative, insulting treatment of his mom & sister. Other heroes call out the villains for less than this dude has done, but Jack just sits there & lets them take it. Why u so beta, bro?? Grrrr.
— May 27, 2020 01:07AM
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Sarah Mac
is on page 172 of 288
"You could have included me on the numbers. As Nancy's brother, it would be logical for me to deal with the financial part of her marriage settlement." ....Logical?! You're the eldest son of a household of unmarried women. By Regency standards, you ARE in charge of the sister's marriage! IT IS YOUR FUNCTION AS THE HEAD OF HOUSEHOLD. Your mom's lover has no authority in this matter.
— May 27, 2020 01:32AM
Sarah Mac
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'She liked being alone with Jack Vernon. She liked the intimacy of it, liked that he could look at her without anyone else as witness. Ariana held her breath, imagining him raking her with those eyes & rendering on paper what he saw. It felt akin to him touching her.'
— May 23, 2020 12:52AM
Sarah Mac
is on page 31 of 288
Like this one so far, esp how neither MC is titled (he's an ex-soldier on pension, she's an actress). I repeat: NO DUKES, EARLS, OR MARQUESSES. A working-class hero! Why is this so rare in modern HR?
— May 22, 2020 01:16PM
