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Page 141 is such a mess, it's so hard to understand.. Grammatical errors, missing letters...
— Jun 12, 2013 04:38AM
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Joanna
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The writing style is really annoying me as there are a lot of places which I feel should have contractions because it seems a bit formal/disjointed without.
— Jun 06, 2013 09:59AM
