Ona > Status Update

Ona
Ona is 17% done
"It was an evening in early June, warm already and scented. Night of love and memories!"
Jun 01, 2020 07:06AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction

flag

Ona’s Previous Updates

Ona
Ona is 30% done
It’s a relationship of smiles and murmurs. It’s a relationship that seems calm, but inwardly it is shaken by continual shocks.

This might be my favourite lines in the entire book.
Jun 04, 2020 02:08AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 23% done
"And after a long pause, he continued breezily, “In town, my dear, in the evening, hundreds and hundreds of lights go on all by themselves as though by a miracle, and at night it’s as bright as by day. Down there people don’t trudge along as we do up here in the midst of snow stones and crags, but they walk on streets smooth as velvet, and, if it rains, they take shelter beneath the porticoes."
Jun 01, 2020 10:38AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 22% done
I see it now. This story's about them--Guerinno and Mariutine. The thing is that the beginning felt far too detached, or maybe I'm used to characters whose head I'm inside from the beginning.
Jun 01, 2020 07:08AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 16% done
"He was thinking that in his youth he had been handsome and good and yet he had got nothing, not love, or wealth, or even pleasure. True, he had not hunted for them; perhaps he had been waiting for them to offer themselves spontaneously; and as he had waited and waited, time had passed into futility."

Deep. Or in other words. If you want something. Get off your butt and go after it! Really enjoying this by the way.
Jun 01, 2020 04:14AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 15% done
"People who are well off don’t have to make a show of it.”
Jun 01, 2020 04:12AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 8% done
"“Lead is good for birds; for certain people it takes a knife.”"
Jun 01, 2020 01:48AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


Ona
Ona is 3% done
"With a heat burning under his skin, his blood-shot eyes see everything as unjust, polluted, hostile: his harvest poor, his house in shambles, his children badly brought up and that wife – that wife with cat eyes."

Subtle switching of POV. You might not even notice if you weren't looking.
Jun 01, 2020 01:46AM
New Italian Women: A collection of of short fiction


No comments have been added yet.