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Only 26 pages in & dealing with some major flaws in this book - for example: if your character is only 26, then how is she wearing a T-shirt from 20 years ago that she wore to a concert? & what decade was this written for - lots of 80's reference (which I get because of my age) - I'm guessing that the original edit of this book had the main character a lot closer to 40 & was changed to appeal to the NA crowd - FAIL!
Jun 17, 2013 05:09PM
Hope Breaks (Hope Trilogy, #1)

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