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Teresa Snyder
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Enjoying the story. Still struggling with the writing. The dialogue between the characters seems forced; unnatural. And, Davy, the 4 year old, speaks as if he's 40 instead of 4.
— Jun 17, 2013 07:05PM
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Teresa Snyder
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Having a little trouble adjusting to the writing style. The dialogue, at times, seems forced; unnatural and stiff. Also not a big fan of the daydream sections. The storyline itself has potential.
— Jun 16, 2013 07:56PM
