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Again with the earnest emotions but too-perfect outcomes. It’s silly but it still is saying something? It’s outdated in a lot of what’s but the heart is there.
— Jun 10, 2020 07:46PM
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In the first book Peter’s stuttering was implied but this one is trying to show it. However, it’s doing it the cliche way with the repeated letters (“w-w-what”). It lacks in creativity and reality, honestly, because speech impediments (is that PC? I don’t know) are more diverse than repeated letters in the start of a sentence/word.
— May 27, 2020 08:39PM
