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Eek! I hope your tolerance for cliches is higher than mine. lol
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Geh.....so far the plot is ok....but there are lots of tremendous sentences
Jeff wrote: "Geh.....so far the plot is ok....but there are lots of tremendous sentences"Yeah, the plot sounded cliche--amnesia, a bag of money, etc.--so I was expecting the prose to make up for that, especially when it was hyped up so much, yet the prose is full of cliche phrases. If you cut them out you'd probably have a 300-page novel.
