Mermarie’s Reviews > Defiant Captive > Status Update

As it was, he burned to run her down like a small animal, crushing her fragile frame within his hands. But he did not because the ferocity of his feelings frightened him. And he had guests to mollify, powerful guests. For thirty-eight years he had been trained by the most exacting of masters to conceal his feelings.

I call BS on the whole 'trained' bit. 90% of the time he acts out said rage!

..."Shall I mount you here and now? On the carpet?" My wound is nearly healed, and I'm good for a night of whoring. Plowing you would be as good as plowing any other tart."

I do love a man who shoor knows how to use a plow. *Farm girl ditzy*

OMG...they got four words in that weren't berating! What a time! XD

Oh noes--morning sickness, nausea smelling food, peculiar dizziness; oh what could it all mean? -.-

"This is how you reply to my offer? Very well, then, I'll make the choice simpler. It's either wed me, or bed me," he said in a voice raw with rage. "You'll not escape me, woman, for I mean to have you, and when I do, it will be your desire as much as mine!" LOL, okay--the hero finally catapulted his way off into the campy deep-end with Devil's Embrace's Tony Pedo-Bear Pettiness.

"Are you afraid, my lying little whore?(And this is after he already realizes she isn't his lying little whore of a wife)"Does the fear make you hot and hungry for my throbbing shaft?" he growls. "You'll have it soon enough, I promise!"

*Sagenod* I'm at a point where I'm about to breaking out the crayolas to make them share, or recommending those schizophrenic outbursts be confined to their inside voice!

This fecktarded fest smacks of Sweet Savage Eden, although more entertaining! :> Also, some weird funk goin' on with those two siblings........ o.o

Longest fight in history. I'm not so sure I think this hero should be that confused over identities, but he's absolutely delicious thus far. >:D