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Eldarwen
is on page 270 of 374
Where was all this action and plot at the beginning of the book?!
— Jun 20, 2013 11:24AM
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Eldarwen
is on page 85 of 374
I'm hesitating between thinking it reads like an unedited first draft and thinking this could actually start being rather good.
— Jun 16, 2013 02:16PM
Eldarwen
is on page 50 of 374
The writing is lacking a certain finesse. The story may be slow in coming but it's starting to go somewhere interesting if the hints are anything to go by.
— Jun 13, 2013 10:19AM
