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Should have said *why* Zach was jealous about not going to school a few years ago (sounds like it's because his brother was going). We didn't know at the time he had a big brother, and it sounded like his parents were holding him from going at the same age as other kids - very different story setup.
— Jun 20, 2013 12:37PM
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Emily
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Why are there so many references of 'things we haven't told you' from Zach's parents, and yet they don't seem at all concerned about sending him to this school?
— Jun 20, 2013 12:37PM
Emily
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Why are all the adults back in time to have kids? Is there a reason for this, or is the worldbuilding just not thoroughly thought through?
— Jun 20, 2013 12:36PM
Emily
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Doesn't start 'moment protagonist's life changed', but did fairly closely - night before he went away to special school. Probably could have skipped that part and flashed back if necessary.
— Jun 20, 2013 12:35PM
Emily
is 13% done
Doesn't start 'moment protagonist's life changed', but did fairly closely - night before he went away to special school. Probably could have skipped that part and flashed back if necessary.
— Jun 20, 2013 12:35PM
