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Chapter 20 Update
Somehow the plot is not thick enough compared to the previous stories or maybe i just got umay of the issues and conflicts the main characters face. The silence and the lack of explanation from the ml compared to the previous story does not make sense. The fl lacks character depth and her development seems hasty. The relationship or where the ml and fl stood in the flashback made little sense.
— Jun 16, 2020 02:53AM
Somehow the plot is not thick enough compared to the previous stories or maybe i just got umay of the issues and conflicts the main characters face. The silence and the lack of explanation from the ml compared to the previous story does not make sense. The fl lacks character depth and her development seems hasty. The relationship or where the ml and fl stood in the flashback made little sense.
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