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M A
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Too many events, seemingly unreleated and rambly. Camden continues to angst about her tiff with Lia and I just find it more annoying the more she mentions it, compares Brynn's behavior to Lia...and then runs away from her crush.
— Jun 23, 2013 05:02PM
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M A
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Chapters 4-5: Hmmm, mixed feelings, lots of character intro, no interesting characters, and Camden is still pretty annoying. Writing quality is inconsistent, but not bad.
— Jun 23, 2013 03:29PM
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Completed the sample and enjoyed the writing enough to purchase the book. Chapter 3 is definitely creepy, but I hope the whole novel doesn't focus on how downtrodden Camden is in her friendship with Lia.
— Jun 23, 2013 07:41AM
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Prologue and Ch. 1: Camden sounds like a fool. Goes to her friend's room to borrow an old swimsuit because she's too self-conscious to wear her own swimsuit. Then she helps herself to best friend's brand new swimsuit "because it looks so much prettier" than the older one ... and when best friend is offended by this Camden assumes "she's mad because I don't look ugly."
— Jun 23, 2013 07:24AM
