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Jodotha
Jodotha is 20% done
I like the cultural aspects, and I like the narrator's voice and the authenticity he brings. BUT... I'm still waiting for a story to happen. There's nothing driving this forward.
Jun 22, 2020 04:43AM
The Marrow Thieves

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Jodotha
Jodotha is 51% done
Still waiting for the story to start. So far it's just following these people around as they run. They're well developed characters, but that isn't enough to carry everything unless something HAPPENS.
Jun 29, 2020 01:41AM
The Marrow Thieves


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