Amanda (ALittleBitofFrost)’s Reviews > Wicked Cries > Status Update

I'm just skimming now. It seems like this book is trying to get all, "You don'tlet people in" emotional, but it literally took like, three interactions to say, "Oh, I like him". I wish I knew this book was this cringy... then I wouldn't have gone in wanting ghosts and mysteries.

She's acting like telling Noah about a journal she found is a big deal. No, you talking to ghosts is. Which there has been a severe lack of so far.

"My sisters..."
Me: You don't have any... ooohhh... We must be in a different perspective... IF ONLY THERE WAS SOME WAY WE COULD DISTINGUISH. APPARENTLY SPACES BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS OR LIKE, DATES DON'T EXIST. We're switching between 2 timelines. Give me a date! Anything!

I just read an entire 2 pages not realizing that we'd switched perspectives. It may just be the ebook, but there wasn't even a space indicating we'd switched. This has happened a few times now...

Can we get to the ghosts now?

What do you mean she doesn't have any homework? And she's in high school? Not a chance. But I'll let it go...

"He had a certain edge to him, something I found lacking in most guys I met." Please tell me he's actually a ghost... I kinda want to pluck my eyes out off my skull already.

The word school was used 4 times in 2 paragraphs. I have a bad feeling... 11% in and I'm already annoyed with the writing...

Wait. It's after 8 and she's not late for school?

I feel like there's too much description. I mean, we know how to unlock a door...