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When was the last time you read an exposition that you thought was actually good? I am so tired of picking up books and it taking 100 pages for everyone to settle down and act naturally- if they ever do. I can’t remember the last time I read a solid exposition section. What authors/books do you have for me, GR? Who is good at that?
— Jun 29, 2020 08:17PM
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In fantasy, T. Kingfisher does it really naturally imo (even if there aren't a lot of characters to introduce). Clockwork Boys for example
Thanks for the wonderful suggestions, guys! I was definitely getting to the point of thinking it was just something I had to put up with.
Curious.If you have time, please provide me with an example of "a solid exposition section." Since you mentioned reading "100 pages for everyone to settle down..." I can only think you are referring to novels, as opposed to expository essays, instructional manuals, etc.
Yes that’s what I am referring to. The exposition=the beginning set up of a novel where we get intro’d to the novel’s world and characters. My complaint is that I find most novels I’ve read recently to have an artificial, inauthentic opening that both slows the action and decreases my interest in the characters who take forever to just start being people and not mouthpieces for info.

I've also liked Michael Ondaatje for the same reason, albeit in a different mode. Coming Through Slaughter and In the Skin of a Lion enmesh their exposition so cinematically into the the main story, such that it's difficult to slice the difference.
I don't think it's incidental that both authors take years to finish their novels. A lot of that time is spent getting the structure right, working out precisely the problem you're describing.