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Pet peeve of mine is when authors weave in and out of different character's POV within the same chapter. Each chapter should have the POV of one character or should be third person. Not this all seeing, all knowing nonsense.
Also, having trouble connecting to any of these characters. Cam and Mia can't seem to stay away from one another, but for no apparent reason. The author said it, so it must be true.
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Jul 04, 2020 05:03PM
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