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Let me get this straight: he just met her last night, she's pregnant and he's INTERESTED, he's an ex-player who now wants to settle down and already sends a shitload of texts, sends her flowers, shows up at her hotel...WHAT.THE.FU*K?!? Not even close to believable...and I'm all for the fairytale but this is a little much. Please get better.
— Jul 04, 2013 04:52PM
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Jul 05, 2013 02:58AM
That's not a fairytale, but a miracle, really. Lol.
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Anne wrote: "That's not a fairytale, but a miracle, really. Lol."And so incredibly unrealistic. This book is on fast forward from the very beginning...it's like seeing a person completely naked on the first date. No mystery or anything left to the imagination, just jump right in. No build up, just BAM! Here I am with all my junk hanging out...I feel horrible that I'm struggling with it.
