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I’m barely even a chapter in and there’s already a typo. Already I can feel this will he better than sixes wild, but I have yet to know if that’ll be in a so bad it’s good kind of way. A simple scene of a fan seeing a celebrity was written well until one paragraph was written like a horror film, then it went back to being normal everyday life.
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— Jul 17, 2020 02:16AM
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Kira Nora Zinnecker
is 27% done
To show some texts on a characters phone the text was italicized and in parentheses. I don’t know if this was intentional, but the next few pages (on the kindle version at least), are italicized for no apparent reason. Be it for grammatical or story purposes. Kind of took me out of the story for a second. I thought they were texting, them I thought it was a dream, now I think it was a big error.
— Aug 02, 2020 02:01AM
Kira Nora Zinnecker
is 16% done
Replacing curse words with names of various fish isn’t as cool as the author thinks it is. Actually it’s not cool (or funny) at all.
— Jul 19, 2020 02:04AM
Kira Nora Zinnecker
is 13% done
When Kylie mentions a Turkish film called revenginator with bootleg subtitles, why was my first thought, the first film that came to mind, A Serbian Film?
Lol.
— Jul 19, 2020 01:43AM
Lol.
Kira Nora Zinnecker
is 10% done
This is getting better. Their relationship isn’t as well written as the Before trilogy, but so far it’s a big improvement on sixes wild. Plus, huskies are cute!
— Jul 18, 2020 01:50AM