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Rocken
Rocken is 73% done
There was the obligatory "bonding experience" with tons of crying, and one MC spiraling into a complete drama-queen. Wait, is this a rewrite of F/M romance with just the names changed?
Now I'll just have to endure the separation at 75% and ensuing drama.
Also, noticing the editing could be better.
Jul 22, 2020 04:09AM
Clashing Hearts (Hometown Jasper, #1)

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Rocken
Rocken is 68% done
I will revise my sentiments from 11%... All the tension here is based on one of the MCs not putting out. As a plot device - it works. Unfulfilled sexual tension keeps the sizzle in the story. But as premises go, it's painfully unrealistic. An adult, out gay man refusing one night stands with other hot men, because he'd feel "used" and he has "standards"? Sounds like a conservative 17 year old female virgin to me.
Jul 22, 2020 12:38AM
Clashing Hearts (Hometown Jasper, #1)


Rocken
Rocken is 11% done
I got SO annoyed when a red blooded, gay, out and proud, male MC declined a no-strings fuck with a hot guy he's totally into and declared he has morals + standards and therefore he doesn't do one night stands.
That is such a female sentiment, and suffocatingly conservative at that. It is almost impossible for a man to act so chaste for no reason at all.
I hope that MC becomes a total slut later in the book...
Jul 21, 2020 03:04AM
Clashing Hearts (Hometown Jasper, #1)


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