Laura’s Reviews > The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake > Status Update

Our narrator is 9 years old, or maybe an adult who is talking hyper-detailed about her childhood. But then we get lines like this: "Find a Wife hadn't been on any visible list, but [Dad] had proposed earlier than most of his peers and something did seem to get checked off inside him once they were married." -- how would a child know this about their parent?! Maybe the author should have gone with 3rd person narrator.