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Naomi
is 20% done
The "telling" here is driving me mad. "Holding out a hand to signal the others to stand their ground". We know what the signal was for, stop explaining every damn thing like the reader's thick!
— Jul 25, 2020 06:53PM
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Naomi
is 13% done
So far, nothing offensively bad but nothing much good, either. A really paint-by-numbers effort made up of police procedural tropes.
— Jul 24, 2020 07:17PM