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Carro
is 45% done
Um, well, it is all very clever and imaginative, but I am having problems with the amount of thinking and re-thinking things done by the main character, with the amount her relatives butt in on her life with ignorant advice and so on. If you find her relatives amusing, then this book would be hilarious for you, but if you find them annoying, and all the internal dialogue excessive as I do, then its a bit of a slog.
— Aug 03, 2020 11:32AM
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Carro
is on page 354 of 480
The annoying relatives are getting less screen time. There have been some clever moments, but I'm finding the length of time it takes things to happen, and the detail of her internal musings to be excessive. Keeping going because there is some good stuff and there has been a new development which is interesting.
— Aug 04, 2020 12:57PM
Carro
is 26% done
Amusing, clever, annoying characters are very annoying. A bit yakkity at times and I need to take breaks and read something in a different style.
— Aug 02, 2020 01:03PM
