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Amie Doughty
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Seriously, it's like Hamilton and/or her editors just yanked out some of the events but left references to them later. What concert is Angel talking about? As always, interesting story, bad writing and editing.
— Aug 09, 2020 02:47PM
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Amie Doughty
is on page 331 of 624
JFC, I wish Hamilton could get her timeline straight. There were 60 hours left on the execution when the story started, it was extended 8, and now suddenly there are fewer than 7 left even though a whole day hasn't passed. Then they return to the hospital just hours after leaving, but Hamilton writes as if a full day has passed. Sloppy. Her stuff is always sloppy.
— Aug 09, 2020 12:51PM
